ForWinter Wonderlandthere are suggested changes of different kinds, and, one way or another, the issues are all of a Rhythmical nature, whether it be a chord arriving too soon, a change of chord (Tenant) to accommodate "rebounds" in the melody, or a transposition to accommodate the position of a sequence of chords.

This one is really worthwhile, especially if one feels adventurous.

Try the revised versions, compare them to the original, joinMusicNovatory.com'sAnalysisJudges, and submit your appreciations and suggestions, as well as contribute to the appreciation statistics available on-site, with the revised version.